Friday, August 23, 2019
Wednesday, August 21, 2019
Current Events
WALT~Use the 6 thinking hats to reflect on our learning
Hi this week we have been working on current events.
The task was to find a article off kiwi kids news and put all the facts into the current event and answer the questions that are in the boxes
This is from Amiee,Nia,Pyper and Neve
Wednesday, July 31, 2019
Current Events
Friday, June 21, 2019
Why kids should have a phone
my opinion is that children should have a phone when they are 10 years old.
Children should have a phone to call the police if there
is something wrong
children need to be incontact with their friends so they can be organes to
meet up with
each other a cell phone can work with a child and a child can
spell better with cell phone.
meet up with
each other a cell phone can work with a child and a child can
spell better with cell phone.
In the U.S children are
so spot to get a phone when they 18 years old. The extra sense of the
security and the safety that a cell phone.
security and the safety that a cell phone.
So know you now that children should have a phone
Persuasive Writing Success Criteria
Introduction
- Opening question
- Opinion/Reason
3 Reasons
- Each paragraph is one idea supported with your reasons/facts
Conclusion
- This ties back/recaps back to the introduction
Highlight evidence of linking words.
I like how there are facts and lost of information next time you can work
on your linking words and more detail in you work by the way you don't have
a conclusion and 3 reasons why you have got one linking word
on your linking words and more detail in you work by the way you don't have
a conclusion and 3 reasons why you have got one linking word
I think that i do need to put some more liking words in my writing and work on
quite a lot to do still
quite a lot to do still
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