my opinion is that children should have a phone when they are 10 years old.
Children should have a phone to call the police if there
is something wrong
children need to be incontact with their friends so they can be organes to
meet up with
each other a cell phone can work with a child and a child can
spell better with cell phone.
In the U.S children are
so spot to get a phone when they 18 years old. The extra sense of the
security and the safety that a cell phone.
So know you now that children should have a phone
Persuasive Writing Success Criteria
Introduction
Opening question
Opinion/Reason
3 Reasons
Conclusion
Highlight evidence of linking words.
I like how there are facts and lost of information next time you can work
on your linking words and more detail in you work by the way you don't have
a conclusion and 3 reasons why you have got one linking word
I think that i do need to put some more liking words in my writing and work on
quite a lot to do still
